Hey there.

This is less than a journal entry, I must say. Whenever I am looking at news articles that talk about clubs, I want to see more than a link to the club and a sentence that might go along the lines of, "Awesome club!" or "Please visit!". Those make it sound like you're begging someone to visit. Those will not help the club get noticed. Here are some things that I would suggest ya do if you want an effective club-based news article.

Well, first of all, start of the news article with an introduction to who you are, and what you do for the club (whether you be a dedicated member, or a "staff" member). After you have properly introduced yourself, you should then introduce the club telling the readers what it is about this club that attracted you to it, or in the case you "work" for the club, why it is you enjoy your position. You could then go on to tell what it is the club is about, and what you do to keep it up and running (ie. games, contests, community projects, etc.)

To move along smoothly, I would then show a few links to the journals that the club has made. These would usually contain "How to join the club." and "Rules of the club", etc.

A formal ending would be in order that says you would be looking forward to seeing any suggestions people might have about the club, and offer open questions in the news article comments.

I hope this helped ya out.

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i think your comment is news.

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I guess that is a compliment, Sean.

I'm glad someone has taken notice to it.

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Whatever, when I wrote it I was doing multiple things at once because I was buisy.

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I'm sorry if you took offense to my comment. I was only trying to point out some techniques that could help you in the future.

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i thank you for your help! I was just in a hurry

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