Spring Haiku Contest Winners
Well, after some long hard thought and the swell advice (judging) from *
AbCat and =
AngelaD we have some winners! But before we get to all that, Id first like to thank everyone for participating and sharing their wonderful poetry not only with me, but with everyone at dA!
Okay, now on with the awards!
The winner of the
Grand Prize is
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`
diamondie
[link]
In place of
yesterday's snow
a white crocus.
Congratulations to `
diamondie on crafting such a wonderful haiku. She will receive a 6 months sub and a
Haiku Rules mug, plus her poem will be featured in the news article to follow soon (hopefully).
Her poem has a great sense of season and movement that is so hard to capture properly in a haiku, in addition to that, it has a quality that
Basho called
sabi, or a sense of aloniness and solitude that I find particularly attractive in haiku.
Now for
second place, we actually have a tie and after some discussion with =
AngelaD weve decided to award the second place prizes to both these pieces!
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~
FerengCheng
[link]
Japanese:
With kanji:
桜は 空に 溶かす 春の 蝶
With hirangana:
さくらは そらに とかす はるの ちょう
Romaji:
sakurawa sorani tokasu harono chyou
English:
Cherry blossoms
Melt in the sky
Springs butterflies
AND
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~
a-random-quigle
[link]
picnic on the hill
green grapes spilling
across the grass
Congratulations to you two, for your wonderful interpretation of spring. Each will receive a 3 month sub & a
Haiku Rules mug and be listed in the news article.
And now, last but not least, the
honorable mentions.
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*
jimandpam
[link]
The plum blossums fall
dancing on the slightest breeze
the chickens rejoice
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~
Keraness
[link]
melting snow -
newfound birds
liltingly rejoice
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*
Esin
[link]
ant hills arise!
fallen white petals
give way to green
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~
MystWilliams
[link]
Through a heart-scratched bus window
a raven falling.
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~
lovetodeviate
[link]
In the thicket
on the cloud
birds
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*
moyanII
[link]
Again and again we meet and part under the sakura blossoms.
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=
SilverBee
[link]
in the garden
a drama of light and color
starlets bloom
How about a big hand for all the great haiku poets!
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Literary babblings.
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