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jonzoiplu for his poem:
oh moses you forgot the roses
between those chiseled lines
how our heavy bellies weigh
upon these hungry spines
you told us tales of flaming bush
and broke our golden calf
after those rules of course, oh god
i think i hear him laugh
the second time you still forgot
to etch the flowers in
to bind your law with beauty
and isnt that the sin
well i think that joshuas
prepared your epitaph
this time hes carved a rose
not just an almond staff
Congratulations to Jonz for a great poem!
and many thanks to those who contributed (in no particular order):
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MaskedVengeance
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justb
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Jon-Law
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apocathary
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damnedlostsoul
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Sabriel80
The rose bloomed, and all was right in the world.




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