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underappreciated deviations feature

=SquidWish:iconSquidWish: reports, 19h 15m ago
about 100 deviations that deserve some recognition
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A series of interviews with deviants whose lives are affected by Fibromyalgia

FM/CFS/ME Awareness Day!

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I am featuring a portion of the 91 deviations,
that popped up in my search for "Fibromyalgia"
here on DA...
PLEASE-
Take the time to read the artist descriptions
under the deviations.
Read their poetry, prose, and stories...
There are also links to more info on this debilitating disease,
and a general info section included!
Education is half of the battle in the understanding of any disease-
And I'm willing to bet if you don't suffer from it-
You know someone who does!

Honey Bee Crisis

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Honey bees have been disappearing worldwide. Find out why and ways that you can stop this alarming phenomenon.
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It Does Not Have Me: Awareness Weeks and Days in the month of May.

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Some tips to save our mother and a special feature!

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:iconshell4art:'s ideas regarding the recent dArama regarding the bill, Orphan's Law Make a change if you dare!

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California legalizes same-sex marriage today!

=slifertheskydragon:iconslifertheskydragon: reports, 2d 23m ago
CA legalizes same-sex marriage today, making CA the first state in the nation to do so.

Know Fibro: mom-the-bomb

*PotterShareCares:iconPotterShareCares: reports, May 13
A series of interviews with deviants whose lives are affected by Fibromyalgia

Know Fibro: opioid

*PotterShareCares:iconPotterShareCares: reports, 1d 21h ago
A series of interviews with deviants whose lives are affected by Fibromyalgia

underappreciated deviations feature

=SquidWish:iconSquidWish: reports, 19h 15m ago
about 100 deviations that deserve some recognition
12 comments   Happenings  Last +fav: *Kelly63

FM/CFS/ME Awareness Day!

=moofied1:iconmoofied1: reports, May 12
I am featuring a portion of the 91 deviations,
that popped up in my search for "Fibromyalgia"
here on DA...
PLEASE-
Take the time to read the artist descriptions
under the deviations.
Read their poetry, prose, and stories...
There are also links to more info on this debilitating disease,
and a general info section included!
Education is half of the battle in the understanding of any disease-
And I'm willing to bet if you don't suffer from it-
You know someone who does!

CFS/ME/FM awareness day: Diamondie's book is out!

*diamondie:icondiamondie: reports, May 12
Attention PWCs, MEites and fibromites. Your plight has been answered. Diamondie, your resident medical writer and patient activist, has finally come out with the English version of her book about CFS/ME/FM treatments, which features over 250 medications that can be used to treat these illnesses.

If you're confused by these strange acronyms, don't fret. Check out the article and you will learn more about these dreadful conditions that affect millions of people in the U.S. alone - most likely including people you know who could benefit from this book.

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Awareness Art - Statement Pieces - Feature.

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Awesome type of art that gets the message out on serious issue raising awareness and helping out good causes. Help these artist's get the message out their have a look, they are all doing great work. This is 'Awareness Art'.

deviantART for iPhone/iPod touch

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deviantART is now completely compatible for the iPhone & iPod touch.

Dog starved to death in the name of art!?

*ThebloodyClown:iconThebloodyClown: reports, 1d 2h ago
If you feel as the same way I did about this please can you sign the pertition here [link]
I don’t know how someone can call that art work, but everyone has there own opinions on things.

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How To Comment

`treijim:icontreijim: reports, Oct 11, 2007
Do you hate it when people ask you to leave comments on their work, and you want to, but you don’t know what to say? Are you at a loss for words when you see a picture you love? Are you unsure of when to tell people to just keep practicing? I had the idea some time ago to type up a simple guide on leaving comments. That is, leaving them as I often try to leave them myself. I’m not saying this is the right way and the only way. These are simply my thoughts on it. Tell me what you think of it all.

All right, so you find a piece of art you want to comment on. What first? Well, I find that a good comment can be divided into sections. Generally, if it’s someone I know nothing about, I start with a compliment, give my thoughts/critiquing (if they encourage it), and end with a compliment. This way, it’s more likely to stick in their mind if they see the overall comment as ‘friendly’.

Let’s look at different areas of leaving comments:

Why do you personally like the picture?
In other words, why did you click on the thumbnail/link? Was it the colours that draw you in? Was it the fact that the thumbnail view looked real, though it was really a digital painting? Was it the subjects of the image that appealed to you? If so, state these things. Tell the person what you like about the image, and that will encourage them to do more of it.

Why do you personally dislike the picture?
It sounds odd, but sometimes I say what I dislike (I don’t say hate) about the picture. In other words, what is it about the image that bothers you, though you may find it impressive overall. It may be that the image is too blurry. It may be too big, or too small. It may be that the person simply slacked off during the making of the picture. State these things, but remember, it’s better to say ‘I think’, as you are stating your thoughts on the image.

What could be improved?
Alternatively, or at the same time, you can tell someone how to improve their work. In my eyes, critique is NOT JUST telling someone what’s wrong with their work. It is telling them what is wrong with it, and informing them of how to fix it. Saying ‘The eye looks odd’ helps nobody. If they drew the eye that way, they most likely don’t know how to draw it properly, so you just wasted a comment. Analysing the works of others also greatly helps you to analyse your own works.

What’s an empty compliment?
What’s an empty compliment? Sometimes you want to say something nice about the image, but if you are fussy with appeal in art, you may find yourself hating someone’s image they put lots of effort into. If this is the case, instead of saying what you think is good, say what is generally good. For example; if you hate red, but they used red very well in the image, say so. You don’t have to like red to be able to see how well they utilised the colour.

They want a comment on a stylisation/category I dislike. What do I say?
Again, I say dislike, not hate. What happens if you dislike photography but a good friend asks for feedback on a photo of theirs? Expand your mind. You don’t have to like it to see what’s good about it. Arrange your words carefully (comments can stick around for a looooooooong time, ya know) and always try to compliment.

What happens if they are so untalented I want to tell them to give up?
Never tell someone to stop drawing. Talent untested is talent wasted. If, in your eyes, they could do with a helluva lot of improvement, simply look at the above things. Is the image so bad that there is not a gathering of specks that you like? I seriously doubt that. Tell people to keep trying, and if they do look bad, go through the rest of their gallery to actually see if it’s an improvement from old works.

How do I tell how good this image is for their standards?
It’s simple. Look at their gallery. Many people, when seeing an image, take a person to be one of two things. First, they assume the artist is a professional so popular they don’t need another comment on their work. Second, they assume the artist is a rookie so bad that comments won’t help. Both are untrue. Everybody here on dA is a growing and learning artist (everyone that does art, anyway), so treat them that way. If the image is good for their standards, say it! Compliment on progress! Tell them they have talent! Really, everyone has untapped talent inside them anyway.

What’s a raw comment?
A raw comment is like the following example; “It’s too blurry”. As useful as the person saying it may think that comment is, it is rather… well, raw. If an image is blurry, it needs sharper detail. Tell them to do sharper detail. Don’t tell them their image is too blurry. On this topic, I once received such a comment, and since then I’ve tried to make my images sharper. I also received one saying my images were too large, so since then I’ve made them smaller. Raw comments may be useful, but overall they are uninteresting and hard to take seriously.

Another example of a raw comment is something like ‘It looks good/great/fantastic/lovely/stupid’. I almost never reply to these comments, as it would simply be ‘thankyou’ and they would reply ‘you’re welcome’. Now that is raw. The artist learnt nothing but that the person liked the work. However, if they really liked it that much, why did they leave such an interesting comment? Well, hence my making this little tutorial is so people can share their thoughts.

I just read all this and it went straight through my head.
I do that a lot, aye. Just look at the summarised list below, and I hope I’ve helped you help others grow with their artwork.

:bulletred: What do you like about the picture?
:bulletred: What do you dislike about the picture?
:bulletred: What can be improved?
:bulletred: You don’t have to like it to think it’s good.
:bulletred: Never tell people to stop drawing.
:bulletred: Is the image good for their standards?
:bulletred: Do you really want to leave a raw comment?

And that’s my thoughts (summarised) on this matter. I hope I helped people out there, and I can only assume many of you read this and learnt something. Actually, that’s another good point. It’s difficult and annoying to assume people are reading your things. Likewise, it’s difficult to assume an artist is reading every single comment you put on each and every one of their images. So, really, it is best to assume people read your comments/journals/whatnot, and be content with that.

The journal version is here [link]

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`Tepara:iconTepara: Oct 11, 2007, 5:56:40 AM
You know this is very interesting.
But you should make it as a tut that would be cool :D

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`treijim:icontreijim: Oct 11, 2007, 6:01:13 AM
A tutorial? Do you mean a specific step-by-step guide? I don't quite understand.

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~MALCOLMYOBSESSER:iconMALCOLMYOBSESSER: Oct 11, 2007, 6:19:59 AM
Good idea to make it a news article budd! <3

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`Tepara:iconTepara: Oct 11, 2007, 7:53:11 AM
Yes.. that is what tut is short for :aww:

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*AWdeV:iconAWdeV: Oct 11, 2007, 8:45:56 AM
now, there's a very clear and understandable piece of writing.
I often try to give decent critiques, so maybe that's another reason m deviation list keeps growing... :ohmygod:

you've got some good points there, I'll try to keep them in mind, thank you :)

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~Chuckmeister:iconChuckmeister: Oct 11, 2007, 8:50:49 AM
Okay, how many people know how to be an Art critic ? Not many I say and there are lots of people who just does not know to give critique. Giving critique is not a easy thing to do.

It is an art to write about Art, this is one point you are missing. It works in the same way as creative writing. I give as much critique as I possibly can.

On another level, one person has to have an understanding. I see many works that have historical, theoretical, philosophical references in the works. Yet when I point this out, they don't understand it themselves. So in this context when giving critique, it does give a the artist or the writer a deeper understanding of what they are trying to achieve with their pieces.

I must admit there are some pieces that I just don't understand and there are works that I understand unless that I am to see a particular reference to my own experience or something that I have experienced with another piece of work. There are works that I able to interpret of what they are trying to achieve on the emotional, physical, mental, psychological and the list goes on.

Still the question remains for all of us... What is art ? What do we like the pictures to be ?

When it comes to critique, in other words, it is a good tactic to neutralize as much as possible. Say to yourself. "Someone likes this. Why? What's interesting about it? Quite often you'll find that in accounting for the interest of others, you will become interested yourself".

Writing about art, possesses a reasonable complexity, that they challenge you intellectually, and that they sustain a high level interest of plane .

Meanwhile, writing about Art then becomes a kind of exploration and in this sense it leads to a sense of excitement, mystery and discovery.

There is so much of what we can think or know about the artist's intention or the viewers experience.

So in the end, I don't know if I have made the right response of what you have said. Yes it makes sense...
~CrazyCoon:iconCrazyCoon: Oct 11, 2007, 9:11:44 AM
Lots of yays for Treijim!
~ChrisSnyder:iconChrisSnyder: Oct 11, 2007, 9:15:01 AM
you do not have to be an expert to give your opinion....any one who thinks a layman's opinion is ingnorant is an elitist fool.....
*EvanescenseFan:iconEvanescenseFan: Oct 11, 2007, 9:28:25 AM
well that was rather helpfull. I think by these standarts my commenting has inproved over the time I've been on DA.

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*SylverStrike:iconSylverStrike: Oct 11, 2007, 10:11:14 AM
I always try to critique art to the best of my abilities, but I rarely recieve the same level of commenting. It's annoying. So, this is very helpful!

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